http://macaulay.cuny.edu/eportfolios/bernstein08/2008/12/03/frances-richey-4/ Arts in New York City: Baruch College, Fall 2008, Professor Roslyn Bernstein Thu, 04 Jun 2009 03:16:37 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://macaulay.cuny.edu/eportfolios/bernstein08/2008/12/03/frances-richey-4/comment-page-1/#comment-242 Kamellia Saroop Wed, 17 Dec 2008 00:48:48 +0000 http://macaulay.cuny.edu/eportfolios/bernstein08/?p=751#comment-242 You focused on how Richey wanted to feel closer to her son while he was away, which I found matched your opening sentence quite well. It tells of what any mother would feel in her situation. You focused on how Richey wanted to feel closer to her son while he was away, which I found matched your opening sentence quite well. It tells of what any mother would feel in her situation.

]]> http://macaulay.cuny.edu/eportfolios/bernstein08/2008/12/03/frances-richey-4/comment-page-1/#comment-128 Keyana Mon, 08 Dec 2008 22:09:19 +0000 http://macaulay.cuny.edu/eportfolios/bernstein08/?p=751#comment-128 I like how you integrated Richey's quote about "getting in touch with her own music" into your piece. It really illustrates her goal in writing the poetry, and how it healed the relationship with her son. I like how you integrated Richey’s quote about “getting in touch with her own music” into your piece. It really illustrates her goal in writing the poetry, and how it healed the relationship with her son.

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