Talk:Culture

From The Peopling of New York City: Irish Communities

This page looks OK, but it needs more work. The text is a little sparse and should be more descriptive - it should specifically address and explain the photos. The photos need more detailed descriptions and should also be minimized a bit (to medium) so they don't overpower the text. Additionally, "St. Patrick" and "St. Patrick's Day Parade" are just stuck at the top - these sections need to be introduced and explained.

I'd add expand the introductory paragraph so that it actually introduces the "Culture" section to the reader, explaining what they'll find in this section and why it's important. This paragraph can be short, but it should give a brief overview of irish culture, a short description of (and link to) the "St. Patrick" and "St. Patrick's Day Parade" sections, and then concluded by introducing each of the sub-sections within this page. --GTD

maybe embed Irish music