Talk:Inwood

From The Peopling of New York City: Irish Communities

Same feedback as other neighborhood pages: This page is in pretty good shape, but it needs better organization. I would try minimizing the photos (to medium) so they don't dominate the text as much. Also, the map is sort of stuck at the top - I would shrink it a bit and embed it within an introductory paragraph that sets up the page for the reader (this could just be a slightly expanded version of the "What is Inwood" sub-section). Finally, I like that you're linking to the other neighborhoods at the top, but this should be standardized across the neighborhood pages and look more like a navigation bar.

Also: I think you could embed a few more photos or charts, there seems to be too much text. --GTD

Write more about the built environment, including housing, special features about the parks. Was the church an Irish church to begin with?